The prompt for short story slam week 7 Bluebell Books
Deep in the jungle far, far away
A monkey looked out from a tree top one day
Banana in hand and story to tell
Of a beach party adventure where coconuts dwell
Out on safari on long winding roads
The monkey did stumble on blues singing toads
This music I like the monkey did say
Well, come to our party it’s happening today
On to the beach the monkey did go
Where elephants danced waving trunks to and fro
Zebras, giraffes and wild lions too
The parrots looked grand in their feathers of blue
Toads playing music from a sand dune
Fish swimming and swaying in time with the tune
The party went on until day was done
Monkey thought his adventure was truly great fun
Author
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Hello.
This is such a fun post.
I love this: “Banana in hand and story to tell”.
Very nicely done!
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love the monkey image added to the post, profound entry.
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Hello Morning, thank you for your comment 🙂
Loved the flow!
Thank you A.B. for your comment 🙂
Love your piece… so light and free, sounds like it’d be a great thing to be a monkey! I’d love to meet those blues singing toads 🙂
Hello, thank you for your comment 🙂
I enjoyed the party! So fun 🙂
Hello bendedspoon, thank you for your comment I am glad you enjoyed the party 🙂
Awesome poem! Great flow. 🙂
Hello Serena, thank you for your comment 🙂
The poem and the pic were fantastic!
Hello Kay, thank you for your comment 🙂
Very fun! I think I will read it to my daughters. And where ever did you find that picture?
Hi M.A.S thank you for your comment, I found the picture on the internet 🙂
I loved your poem … especially all the different animals/creatures , big & small , who were part of the action !
Thank you mish 🙂
Very cute and bouncy, Jeanie. The blues singing toads cojured a vision that made me laugh.
Thank you Charles, I am glad the poem made you laugh 🙂
Banana in hand and story to tell
Of a beach party adventure where coconuts dwell
love these lines the best, thanks for sharing.
Thank you Jingle for your comment, this was a fun prompt to fire my juvenile imagination lol