When grey skies are all around
And only darkness can be found
All things look so dull and bad
Living a life that makes you sad
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You can’t help the way you feel
Everything feels so surreal
Tomorrow may be filled with dread
What’s going on inside your head
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Depression is a awful thing
Β Skies are grey and no birds sing
Joy that seems so far away
Will come back again one day
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These days will pass after a while
Once again you’ll Β give a smile
When you conquer that bad day
All in time and in your way
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You will hear sweet birds sing
And know the joy life can bring
And when that darkest day is done
Depression lost and you have won.
In my heart I can see
Exactly what you mean to meΒ
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A simple smile or tender kissΒ
When you’re near my life is blissΒ
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Spirit flying like a dove
In my heart I know it’s love
For Poet’s Rally week 53
Poetry Palace Perfect Poet Award
Thank you to Poetry Palace for the award I am very pleased to accept Β it.
I would like to nominate June_Butterfly
Beautiful composition and flow as it rings sweetly in my head. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you Leonargo for your kind comment π
Nice rhyme and I liked the inner cadence to the piece as well π thanks for your recent visit!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/10/11/the-measure-of-appurtenances/
Thank you I will pop over to you this afternoon π
such agreeable sentiments, well done.
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Thank you Orange Tree π
great acrostics jeanie and tq for coming by.. π
Hello, fiveloaf thank you too π
Like, after the rain comes the sunshine π Well said! Loved it!
Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason
Hi Leo, thank you for your kind comment. π
Congrats! Very well written.
Thank you Old Raven. π
Very nice, Jeanie! I liked your poem a lot! Also, congratulations on the award! Glad to be included with you π Blessings, Terri
Hello terri thank you for your kind words, congratulations to you too xx
super beautiful.
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have you linked your entry to the linkz yet?
Hello morning, I will be linking today. sorry for the delay I have been busy with work and study,I will catch up with everything today xxxx
Great piece…depression is so devastating…for some nothing you do can brighten their day..I felt the pain and emotion here
Hi Susie, thank you for your kind comment )
Thank you for your comment Holzpellets